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River
01-22-2010, 02:00 AM
What if? is a poem written -- beginning now -- by any who arrive here to add a line. One at a time.... What if? may rhyme at times, but break from that at other times....

What if? is serious play, and playful seriousness. And now begins What if?

[Please do not be shy! Everyone is a poet. Just FEEL and SENSE the emergence of the rhythms and textures of the first line, the second line, the two together, the first three... and wherever it is at, just be SPONTANIOUS in a PLAYFUL way, light, yet "serious" enough, but no more. This is play! So play.]

ONE LINE PER POST. Simple. And never mind proper punctuation. I didn't.

River
01-22-2010, 02:01 AM
What if the sands on the bank of a nameless river?

sisterinlove
01-22-2010, 02:49 AM
Contained the voices of those who have gone before?

CielDuMatin
01-22-2010, 01:08 PM
What if the soul of a giver

MonoVCPHG
01-22-2010, 03:22 PM
surrenders to the soul of a Taker

CielDuMatin
01-22-2010, 03:26 PM
What if that icy-cold shiver

MonoVCPHG
01-22-2010, 03:44 PM
is the one you wake up beside.

GroundedSpirit
01-22-2010, 05:05 PM
A quiet voice whispers to you...

CielDuMatin
01-22-2010, 05:34 PM
and with that whisper screams into the dark corners of your soul

sweetie
01-22-2010, 10:59 PM
Echoes with a feeling, you long thought forgotten

MonoVCPHG
01-22-2010, 11:14 PM
draped in scars it lies in wait

Catfish
01-23-2010, 05:26 AM
What if the river washed stones shown the sun

MonoVCPHG
01-23-2010, 05:29 AM
but to see their beauty meant blindness. Would you look?

GroundedSpirit
01-23-2010, 04:48 PM
You wonder now- do this I KNOW - or did it come from a book

sweetie
01-25-2010, 12:11 AM
Do you regret thoughts spoken aloud, and words you can't take back ?

River
01-26-2010, 11:53 PM
And what of the oughts spoken in crowds, read from the pen of a hack?

sweetie
01-27-2010, 05:46 AM
Do you accept them as truth or no that they're not

Catfish
01-28-2010, 09:42 AM
What if every word uttered was truth?

starlight1
01-28-2010, 11:53 AM
Or every truth a lie?